Shine Lucky Stars
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My Lucky Star
Shine Lucky Star
I smiled at your tiny face.
...and I heard your very first cry.
I put you to my bosom to feed,
...until the day grew nigh.
Inside your crib I rocked you.
I sang as you I bathed.
You grew to walk and talk and laugh,
And shine lucky stars every day.
Those days have gone...my little star.
And I long for your sweet silly voice.
The times have changed,
...and our places rearranged.
...and my heard can no longer rejoice.
But my hope doesn't wane to find you someday
...and hold you in my arms again.
I'll never let go...
Though a man you should grow.
Those the days have gone...but I love you my lucky star.
Copyright © 2011 Abby Dunne
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Very touching. Made me think of my own son.
This is true love at it's core, I must commend how from the heart this is.
This I tried to add however I am not sure it took so I'll try again this heart felt writting reminds me of this song and I hope you agree or at least gives you some sort of insperation ......http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ITux9Ky5I8
Thanks so much for the comments. bolt195, its a beautiful song you have shared. And yes its very inspiring. The best way to get things is out for me has always been through poetry or songs. If it were up to me, I wish I didn't have to feel the pain of separating from my child. But, it is what it is.
Dear gabgirl12, you are more than welcome, well sometimes one must look at life like you say "it is what it is" however I believe and I have also witness the beyond, I don't think, I know it is. strangely enough I just wrote about my witness, perhaps if you read it it may give you some insight as to what I am talking about.
i called it for All Who May Doubt the Surrender. it is in the religion section. Take care and let your heart guide you, for it will never lie.
I read it, and I understand what you mean. I know and trust God to lead the way, but suffice to say I have to admit to being a human being. If I didn't then Jesus on the Cross wouldn't help me cope with times like these. Thanks for sharing your witness.
that is agood thing most people tend to forget their humanity or mortalityfor that matter. We all must travel through this rabbit hole. just that some believe they don't. Thank You for the read and take care.
I Told You if I found the song I would share it with you, and so I did.....http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ml3YHUkRI1Y
Senoritaa Level 6 Commenter 6 months ago
Very touching, and beautifully woven.